dilluns, 26 de setembre del 2011

my last summer



MY LAST SUMMER

1.- I went to Berlin.

2.- I returned to Banyoles.
3.- I prepared for school.

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First i went to Berlin; Berlin is a modern city with a lot of buildings. Berlin is the capital of Germany. When  I was there I visited: The Brandenburg door and the Reichstags, that is the parliament of Germany, and the Sony center.

Then, I returned to Banyoles and I met my friends every day in the lake. Also I did some activities like playing tennis and I went fishing with my uncles in Empuriabrava on Sundays.

Finally I prepared for the school, I went to buy new school material and books

OBSERVATION OF MY ORAL PRESENTATIONS

Did you use any resources? Yes, I use a power point, with some images.
 Were the resources relevant and attractive? Yes because the power point I help me.


BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT
- Did you look at your audience most of the time? Yes, I look the audicence all the time
- Did you read from your notes? I don't read.
- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? No, I don't
STRUCTURE
- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes, I did 
- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear? No, I didn't use any markers.
-Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience? Yes,  I introduce new information of Berlin.
- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..? No, I didn't
was your information more superficial or more detailed, and original? More superficial
LANGUAGE
- Did you check your grammar? Yes I check my grammar.
- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary? I look at de dictionary.
- Did you use sentence linkers? No i didn't use that.
- Did you use  fillers? Yes I use.

PRONUNCIATION AND INTONATION
- Did you know how to pronounce all your words? Yes I know 
- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No I didn't check
- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? No, I didn't change my voice
-Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? I think with a fluid continuum.
My final mark is: 7


My class oral presentation.
Laura S: She wets to Cantoni, Toossa de mar.
Laia R: Estartit, Riding in a Summer camp.
Carlota: Poole, cruise and Molina.
Marta: Almería, England, Platja d'Aro, Calonja and Dublin.
Bernat D: Cantoni, he wents to Platja d'Aro.
Paula C: Banyoles, tarragona , hospitalet
Pau G: Platja d'Aro, Tossa.
Marta T: Grandparents house, Andorra , Carmelló.
Mireia N: Berlin, Poole, London , Platja d'Aro, Banyoles.
MIreia F: Andorra, Estartit, Banyoles.
Nuria: Cantoni, Poole, Costa Azul.
Julia V: Cruise grese islands, l'EStartid, Juanelles.
Pol M: Platja d'Aro, going in the cruise.
Gerard: He visited Cadiz, Sanlucar, Banyoles.
Blanca: England (Poole), India, pals
Esther: Albera, Granada, Italy, Banyoles.
Enric: Praga, Berga, Banyoles.
Elena M: Germany, poole, kenya and Zanzibar.
Bernat R: Banyoles, Tarragona, Delta de l'Ebre.
Mònica: Summercamp, Banyoles, Berga, Escala.

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